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A cross between her fingertips
She says she never meant to hurt you
But the splinters in your heart tell you otherwise
And if she loves you any more
You’ll surely die, but does it matter
Does it matter that you still feel her
Fingers pushed inside you, playing with your soul
Brushed against your angel wings
You mean to tell her, honestly
You really wish she’d choke
But her corset tightens ‘round your lips
And her ribbons, down your throat
You’re stupid again
Stupid to think she’d listen any way
When all that’s said is lies
Admit you’ve come to need them
Grown attached to their subtle joys
And when that cross between her fingers
Presses firmly against your chest
Next time you’ll surely cry
Knowing full well that silence is best
©2005-2009 ~oxoxHERxoxo
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Full Title:: .Black.Ribbon.(What Keeps you Quiet)
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Preview Image:: Me, brushes- [link]
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Enjoy :heart:

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:iconakikoweasley:
Your poetry always blows me away :clap:
:iconoxoxherxoxo:
Thank you so much :glomp:

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:iconshiftingwaterz:
gorgeous :clap:

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If death is the answer to love's mysteries,
Then bleed on my darling to the sound of a dream
:iconagent-strange:
awesome! v.powerfull.

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~*Love is the funeral of hearts. Falling in love is the best way to kill your heart because then it's not yours anymore. It's laid in a coffin, waiting to be cremated.*~ Ville Valo :blackrose:
:iconhappyandbleeding:
I cant even describe how beautiful your poem is... amazing... definate :+fav:

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You're a soothing vibration, freshly served hero. You feel like Ron Twitt carpet under my hood. Viva rebel poker. Seriously. You're minnie mouse in my pants.
:iconendlessdark619:
wow, you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. :worship: the picture is great too...It really describes the poem well....and your hair looks very sassy in it! =D

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Clever words on smooth tongue talking shove it brother just keep walking!
:icondarklair666:
this poem is amazing. I love the imagery of the corset and the ribbons. completely amazing.

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I reject your reality and substitute my own - What you see isn't everything
:iconcinnamongurl22:
wow...another great one...you sure do have a way with words:worship:

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Why be difficult? When you can be impossible.......me
:iconultramanzeta:
Beautiful work.

;)

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"Humans make errors in judgment. It is sometimes necessary to protect them from their own inadequacies."
:iconidiosyncrasies84:
Absolutely beautiful poetry. I love it.

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